Monday, September 15, 2008

Significance

Today, Once again I decided to write. My writing may or may not suite you but your comments are most welcome :) Njoii!!

A drop of water
Within vast sea
A leaf on the tree
A tree in the jungle
A moment in the life
Someone in the crowd
A thread in a cloth

What is the significance
Having traffic accidents, for example
Insignificant for most
Still changing lives of some

Thy importance in this world
Perhaps unnoticed by many
But there are some
Loving you more than life

3 comments:

Winnie the poohi said...

Ah nice try!! :)

Amazing thought and conceptualization!

just one thing... the first stanza cud b a bit edited more

Anonymous said...

Subhan allah kya likha hai.

Yashu said...

poet!! wah!! nice work!! :D

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